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    Sixth Poem Of The Zookopolis

    The Penetration Of Eve And The Invagination Of Adam

    If he'd been a monsieur
    and she'd been a madame
    - two in trothed connection -
    there wouldn't be objection
    to the penetration of Eve
    and the invagination of Adam.

    But he was just a stable boy
    cleaning up the stalls;
    whilst she was born the pride and joy
    - perhaps a future tycoon's toy -
    in a mansion with a marble floor,
    and by the welcome teak wood door, a bin of parasols.

    But alas, so it is,
    when the smell of cherry blossoms
    meets a wall of April wind,
    and both conspire
    with the red warbler choir;
    then the penetration of Eve
    and the invagination of Adam
    is a foregone conclusion.
    The senses must stumble from the gentrified den
    and the senses must grab from the straw in the loft;
    no one can really say who, where, or why,
    the lust only lives for the moment and dies.

    Into the softness
    the hardness begins;
    the penetration of Eve
    and the invagination of Adam
    has no use for saints and no mind for sins;
    it's just the yang yearning to be in
    deep inside the virtuous yin.



    Copykalliopes@December.02.2013
    Uncle Zook
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    Re: Sixth Poem Of The Zookopolis

    you are a good poet, Mr. Zookie...

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    Re: Sixth Poem Of The Zookopolis

    Thanx, Adam. That said, poems are the living arts and tend to get better on the second try, so ...


    The Penetration Of Eve And The Invagination Of Adam

    If he had been her monsieur
    and she, his madame
    (two in trothed and trialed connection)
    there wouldn't be objection
    - not even a "Damn 'em!" -
    to the penetration of Eve
    and the invagination of Adam.

    But he was a stable boy
    cleaning the stalls;
    whilst she was born the pride and joy
    - perhaps a future tycoon's toy -
    in a mansion with a marble floor, three-storey walls,
    and by the teak wood welcome door,
    a bin of parasols.

    But alas, so it is,
    when the smell of cherry blossoms
    meets the mid-April wind
    at the end of a gyre,
    both conspiring with the red warbler choir;
    then the penetration of Eve
    and the invagination of Adam
    is a foregone conclusion.

    The senses must stumble from the gentrified den
    and the senses must rise to the straw in the loft,
    and then,
    it won't really matter who, where, or why,
    just that lust only lives for the moment and dies,
    and thrust only gives until it is dried.
    So into the softness
    the hardness begins;.
    the penetration of Eve
    and the invagination of Adam,
    moments of youth feeling no sin,
    in finding the truth
    about the yang wanting in,
    deep inside the virtuous yin
    ... over and over and over again.


    Copykalliopes@December.02.2013
    Uncle Zook



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