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    10th Poem Of The Zookopolis: "The Most Erotic Part Of A Woman"

    The Most Erotic Part Of A Woman


    The most erotic part
    of a woman is not her heart,
    which sways and swoons and sweeps
    abetted by a regular rhythmic beat:
    a soul entangled on a mortal coil of nerves and meat,
    with bones softly suspended on liquid springs.

    Is not her personal crevasse of creation
    fully protected by a loyal tribe
    of fuzzy wuzzies - arranged in interlocking V-formation -
    just behind a vanguard shield of simulated fig leaf.

    Is not the pair of federated fruit
    hanging on the milk tree;
    with an integrated straw protruding from each
    to make sucking effortless like lips upon a ripened peach;
    abundant bulging curves to send poets to ships and pentameter seas
    and painters to easels in the harbored hope
    of finding nudes abandoned by Matisse.

    Is not even her face,
    though some have allure enough to draw them in from wars afar
    to the war within,
    between the fighter man and the lover meme;
    from a moment glance to an eternal deed
    pulling the golden chariot and its seated queen.

    The most arousing part of a woman, at least for me,
    is her labyrinthine brain and the mind
    that plays within: a vestibule of infinite virginity
    with an invitation to penetrate deep and daily;
    in turn, to be freshly summoned and invaginated by
    - beyond the wide of possibility -
    and before the stride of changing skirts
    as the sky undresses above the Earth.


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    UncleZook_InTheRhymeMachine

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    Re: 10th Poem Of The Zookopolis: "The Most Erotic Part Of A Woman"

    Zook...you're good, I think you should spend much more of your time writing (even publishing) your poetry than searching for truth...you will never find it until your poetic heart meets your not-so-poetic brain.

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    Re: 10th Poem Of The Zookopolis: "The Most Erotic Part Of A Woman"

    I'm flattered sufficiently.

    But if you could address me as Poet Potentate Zook from now on, I'll upgrade my appreciation of it.

    Since Eerily.


    Pax

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